LIVE: Converge (the new and updated version of The Rental)

LIVE! The new cover and updated book is available!

Converge v2 - Rebecca Berto (prev. rental)SMALLThis is the same story but there are new scenes and the book has been updated in general. I love this version. (I even think you should read it again if you already read the original The Rental.)

I’ve contacted Amazon to make this update available to people who’ve already purchased the old edition (nee The Rental).

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Download the free prequel:

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I’ll keep you updated about the release of the sequel to Converge, which is now titled, COMBUST! ♡

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Converge update! (the new version of The Rental)

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Getting super close now! I’m hoping that in the next few days the new version of Converge (nee The Rental) will be live at retailers to download!

It has all new scenes, deleted old content, and the story is basically an enhanced version of the old one, so the core of it remains an erotic love story between Rick and Vee.

You don’t need to re-read this version, but I recommend you do because it’s awesome. ;) I’ll be contacting Amazon to make a free update available to all those who’ve already purchased the old version of The Rental.

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the post titled “A Long Time Coming …”

Hey all! It’s going to be a busy time for me in the next couple of months! A lot of you have asked and wondered about The Reversal (sequel to The Rental). I’m finally at a stage where I can share a few details–but not too many yet! I swear I will when I am able to.

  1. Yes, I am working on The Reversal right now, but see 2.
  2. I am renaming, rebranding, rewriting and giving new covers to this series. What does this mean for the books? Vee and Rick and the characters will still be there and so will the story, but the content is changing. Why is it changing? As this series unfolds, I am uncovering loads of potential. I want to make changes in The Rental that will set it up in a better way for its sequel than it iscurrently written.The Rental and The Reversal will feature new and enhanced content, and The Masquerade: a prequel will mostly remain the same on the inside although its changes will mimic the other two books for the same “look”.
  3. That name change … Look out for the new names that I will reveal in the near future. Each book cover will have a small subtitle to indicate which book was named what from the old titles.
  4. I am in the very early stages of co-writing a new book with another author. *cue squeals* Sorry to be a tease–or am I? ;) I can’t wait for this, you guys!

Stay tuned! I’ll update you whenever I can. Make sure you subscribe to my blog (buttons in the top left corner sidebar on home page) or to my newsletter so you don’t miss a thing.

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Pre-orders now available for Amazon KDP users

That’s right! You heard it!

Amazon is now making the pre-order function available for all self-publishing authors who publish books via KDP. You don’t have to be part of their Select program.

I’m going to set up one soon for The Rental! Watch out for the links :)


Find out the details here:

N.B: If you weren’t aware, pre-order function has been available at the site Draft2Digital for some time, and you can use them to pre-order your book to iTunes, Kobo and Barnes & Noble, get paid from one place, receive easy and fast customer service help, and use an efficient system. Read up about D2D here.

Goodreads Book Giveaway

 The Rental by Rebecca Berto

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Giveaway ends September 30, 2014.

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I wasn’t going to say anything, but . . .

. . . but I’ve had a few enquiries about my books, so I thought I should let you all know aloud what’s going on inside my head in case there are a few others, wondering silently.

I won’t be publishing books for a while. I don’t know what the book will be when that time comes again or when it will be, but I know that when I do publish more it won’t be any time in the near future.

In the meantime, I’ll be publishing my book reviews on Novel Girl. Please do comment and let me know what else you’d like to see me posting about since I won’t have my own book stuff to share anymore.

If you need a book cover designed, you can always visit me at Berto Designs. I have much more time to fit in clients these days, so drop by and check out the site, and send me an email if you’d like to chat about a project.

Thanks for all your support!


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11 pre-release buzz and exposure tips for authors

In this post, I take off assuming you have your book listed on Goodreads, that you already have a book cover and all the other basics. This post is geared for authors needing to do their own promotion, so while it is great for self-publishers, traditionally contracted authors will find this helpful too if they need to do promotion of their own and are stuck for ideas.

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Do a Goodreads paperback giveaway

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Though many people are reading eBooks, paperbacks are still shiny and wanted formats. They’re special formats of books to put on a real shelf. The benefit you’re going for here regardless if they read the paperback is exposure. It’s free to list and only costs you the price of the book and postage which is peanuts compared to book ads.

Take advantage of the fact that Goodreads report many books average 900+ entries and many of them even reach thousands of entries. Now THAT is a lot of new people seeing and reading about your book!

Create and share teasers on social media

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E.G. teaser

Sharing the favourite parts of your book on social media helps create an army — whether small or enormous — that will get excited about your release too and in turn help promote it out of their own excitement and interest. So go on and grab a properly licenced image (creative commons, stock purchase, or with permission signed by a photographer) and add text.

Images + text = creates more attention, so grab a short excerpt (1-5 sentences, relatively average size) or a tagline and add it to your text and post to social media, welcoming and inviting people to share it.

Share about 3-6 teasers (or more if you have the time) before release and spread it out over a few weeks, not crammed into a few spammy-and-annoying days before release.

Send out ARCs to reputable reviewers weeks before release

Timing is optimal for sending out ARCs (Advanced Reader Copies). Give only days and almost all your reviewers won’t have time to get to it, and give a few months and they could forget about it by the time it comes to reading just before release.

Depending on the length of your book, go for 2-6 weeks ahead of schedule, depending on if you have a novella or short novel upwards to an epic saga.

Do a book blitz or blog tour or review tour

Screen Shot 2014-03-05 at 9.05.38 AMThese days, book tours are effective for exposure rather than generating book sales, and book blitz are heading that way too with the market more flooded than ever before.

As I said above though, you need to create a buzz, and you can’t stop trying to create the biggest buzz possible. Book blitzes are a cheaper option and are probably just as effective as book tours (since you can organise reviews on your own, and for free) so the little investment for a book blitz is worth it. You can get tens of blogs upwards to hundreds posting on release day or week for your book. They list the cover, synopsis, Goodreads link, book buy links, and often excerpts or teasers.

Companies for book blitzes or tours include Xpresso Book Tours, AToMR Book Blog Tours, and Love Between The Sheets Promotions. (I personally vouch the quality of these hosts)

Update your social media with posts about your progress on the book

Stay current in the mind of readers and find new readers by posting regularly about your book.

Don’t be spammy and make continual posts about them, so break these up amongst other types, but vary it and gain excitement for your book by posting fun facts, casting characters images, funny bits during your editing process, interesting things about the characters or storyline. Anything that will get people reading and asking questions.

Link reviewers with books sites where they can now post their review of your book

It’s hard for reviewers to keep track of all their reviewing list so kindly remind them they can now post their book review on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, etc, as well as Goodreads if they haven’t already (the former is true for self-publishers since most can’t have book site links before they click publish).

Send out email with book links to bloggers on review day

Book bloggers are overworked and that’s an understatement. Regardless of this fact, they are still gracious people who will help authors share links for their book if they have the time and are interested. Gather the emails of book bloggers who accept and invite authors to email them promotional stuff and let them know that your book is live with link/s and thank them for their help and time.

N.B. always BCC everyone or email individually with their names in separate emails!

Do a post with links

If you have a blog, why not use, it? For every social media account you have, post links with your books.

Pictures help for a better result so add your book cover and/or a teaser to your post and link Goodreads and all the available book sites to buy your book. For Amazon, I recommend using a site like BookLinker because it sends the clicker to their country’s Amazon site. You then don’t have to list the ~11 country Amazon links AND you can check your click hits, too!

Send out to email subscribers

Do you have an email newsletter list? Don’t forget about this one! Most authors don’t use this regularly so it can be easy to forget. Why not use the tens, hundreds, thousands, or more people you have waiting to hear stuff about your books? Regardless of your list length, this will be beneficial!

Highly recommended and free!

Highly recommended and free!

Do a pre-release tour or book blog post features

It’s popular to do a feature on book blogs when and after you publish, but even if you’re a self-publisher who can’t list pre-order links, you can still gain interest and start that buzz by doing a feature with a host, or asking some bloggers yourself if you can feature you and your book on their site.

You never know what will work for exposure, so why not see if book bloggers want to feature you and get in front of their many thousands of eager book-reading followers?

Hold giveaways for readers to win prizes

Authors have their cover completed well before publishing, so why not use that to even more of an advantage! Order bookmarks or key rings or another promotional item with your cover or cover image and then hold giveaways for readers in exchange for entries such as adding your book to Goodreads or sharing a picture or post on social media.

I hope this list helped you!

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Blurb writing: you can do it (well)!

I’m in the process of revising my next novel, The Rental, an erotic romance in a series of books centred about characters working at The Rental, an escort-type agency where anything is possible except the sale of the most intimate act: sex. It’s an eye-catching topic and I knew from months ago I had to do it justice and get a killer blurb written for it.

Helpful Links

I won’t repeat information since there are so many resources out there, but I’ll direct you to the most helpful ones I found in my Googling expeditions. All these links below share some of the tips I really value when it comes to a good blurb: length, evocative words and imagery, killer opening and closing, conflict.

  1. 5 Tips – How to Write a Winning Book Blurb → Mentions use of certain “hook” words; write in a style similar to your book; use the book’s main theme as a way to focus the blurb.
  2. 5 Tips for Writing a Compelling Book Blurb by Amy Wilkins → Use shoutlines; use an excerpt from the manuscript; end with conflict.
  3. How To Write Back Blurb For Your Book → Hint the plot only; name main characters; use a question or hint of mystery that begs to be answered.
  4. The 5 core elements of a book blurb (and why you should know them) → pick-up line; don’t be misleading; keep them wanting more.
  5. How to Write a Brilliant Blurb for Your Book → Search for the subheading called: “Five basic elements”. It lists a sentence broken up by (1), (2), (3), (4) and (5) showing you a structure. There is other great advice, so keep reading that post.

Word Count

I’ve heard a lot about suggested word counts, but I wanted to find out myself what the bestselling books were using. If you’ve heard of most of the books in the below list, you’ll know they’re huge sellers. I’ve used all popular books here as that blurb has obviously sold the book well. The word count difference is interesting.

Note the suggest word count ranges from 100-150 words.

Average Blurb Lengths

Book Blurb count
Twilight 151
Fifty Shades of Grey 152
The Submissive 138
The Siren 150
Bared to You 118
The Hunger Games 106
Harry Potter 145
The Giver 97
The Book Thief 140
The Perks of Being a Wallflower 187
Looking For Alaska 142
Wintergirls 167
The Da Vinci Code 222
The Time Traveler’s Wife 174
Water for Elephants 145

A working example

This is the go I had of my next novel, The Rental:

Would you sell your body for everything but sex if you needed the money?

That’s the dilemma for eighteen-year-old, Vee Wyland. Three months ago she lost her father, and her boyfriend and her best friend deceived her in the worst way. All in one night. Her boyfriend’s brother, Rick Delaney, witnesses the event, supporting her for a fleeting moment.

One night she loses her job, halving the already tight income her mum and her depend on. She runs into Rick Delaney who propositions her.

Become a rental. Sell yourself for everything but sex.

From the moment Vee and Rick re-unite, their sexual chemistry is scorching. He ignites passion back into dull world. It’s simple enough until emotions are involved.

Fall into the scorching new world of The Rental, where the foreplay builds to a thrilling climax.

That was great (in my biased opinion), but read the current blurb, written by a friend (whom I am very indebted to and love!) of mine who knew nothing of the story but the key details I gave her, and then tweaked by me:

Eighteen-year-old Vee Wyland is no stranger to loss. In the blink of an eye, she loses her father in a horrible accident. And when she needs her boyfriend the most, he leaves her for her best friend. Suddenly, the girl that had everything unravels, caught in a downward spiral of grief and financial loss.

Drop-dead gorgeous and old crush, Rick Delaney waltzes in and opens her up to the world of The Rental, where everything is for sale, except sex itself.

It seems easy enough … guarding your heart, but selling your body.

But it’s hard to trust your ex-boyfriend’s brother.

Dealing with his own demons, Rick is drawn to Vee and the white-hot sizzle that flares when she walks into a room. From the moment they re-unite, their sexual chemistry is undeniable. He ignites passion back into her dull world, and it seems all fun and games until feelings get involved.

Fall into the scorching new world of The Rental, where hearts get broken and the foreplay builds to a thrilling climax.

The idea is to separate yourself from the story as the writer, and write the blurb as a marketing guru. So give yourself time, do a heap of blurb writing research, and get outside opinions to give you honest pointers.

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Suggested professionals for hire

Search no more! I have professionals to hire here, that I suggest, for your eBooks and paperbacks. It isn’t a huge list but for self-publishing authors, high-quality recommendations go a long way in saving time and money, lowering stress, and increasing satisfaction.

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If you want a cover design, remember I own Berto Designs and can turnaround a design in a week which is much quicker than other designers as I’m still building my client base.

Drop me a line at: or visit my website or Facebook page.

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Lauren K McKellar (structural, copy/line, and proofreading)

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Danielle Poiesz (structural, copy/line, and proofreading, manuscript analysis)

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COVER DESIGNERS (some do blog and swag design too)

Berto Designs (that’s me!)
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Cover It Designs
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Eden Crane Design (estimated pricing — please check)
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Najla Qamber Designs
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Once Upon a Time Covers
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Wicked by Design
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E.M. Tippetts Book Designs
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—– ROUGHLY ABOVE $150 —–

KILA Designs
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Steph’s Cover Design
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—– ABOVE $350 —–

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Mae I Design and Photography
Website  |  Facebook |

Okay Creations
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Phatpuppy Creations
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FORMATTERS (eBook and paperback)

E.M. Tippetts Book Designs
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Fictional Formats
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JT Formatting
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Xpresso Book Tours (Only for YA and NA books and their genres)

AToMR (Only for books with romance as the category or subcategory)

Good Choice Reading (Most genres)

Literati Literature Lovers

Book Addict Mumma

Dark World Book Tours
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Lady Amber’s Tours

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Rebecca Berto is the author of PreciseDrowning in You and Pulling Me Under (sequel to Precise) If you want book-release updates, please sign up at this form (email only when news, not weekly).

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Book publishing update: “Precise” and “Pulling Me Under”

I haven’t talked about my books in a while (naughty Rebecca!) so I wanted to say hi, introduce myself to my new followers and give you some info on my upcoming books and such.



About the author

Rebecca Berto writes stories about love and relationships. She gets a thrill when her readers are emotional reading her books, and gets even more of a kick when they tell her so. She’s strangely imaginative, spends too much time on her computer, and is certifiably crazy when she works on her fiction.

Rebecca Berto lives in Melbourne, Australia with her boyfriend and their doggy.

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Precise: new cover and expanded edition

  • I will reveal the new cover for Precise designed by Berto Designs and unveil the expanded edition.
  • The book is currently permafree (permanently free) on Amazon US & CA, iTunes (internationally) and Smashwords. Barnes & Noble, and Kobo are currently updating and will hopefully follow soon.

Freebie links with new edition LIVE >>>

Amazon US: | Amazon CA: | Smashwords: | iTunes US: | iTunes UK: | iTunes Aus: |

Freebie links but NOT the updated version yet >>>

Barnes & Noble: | Kobo: |


Pulling Me Under

  • The novel in the Precise series, Pulling Me Under has a cover reveal (sign up here:
  • The event includes blurb and quote teasers. Cover designed by Berto Designs


Pulling Me Under published

  • Date isn’t set but during late October the novel, Pulling Me Under will be published.

OTHERS — late 2014 to early 2014

  • Tentative release for a new standalone novel. I am in the early stages of writing a new Mature New Adult/Adult Contemporary Romance novel. I am hoping to release it around late November, but this can change depending on if it’s practical to release that soon.
  • In early 2014 I will be releasing the sequel to Drowning in You, titled Finding Forever in Us. You can add it to Goodreads here.



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Survey results: What are your book-buying habits?

A week ago I posted a survey for Novel Girl readers to fill out. The result was fantastic. I’m about to share the results here. Please keep in mind I’m just one tiny author/blogger and I’m not a powerhouse. That said, I got 100+ responses (104 to be exact) and in my opinion, that is a decent amount to use to analyse and learn from these results.

Without further ado, I will post the questions, a graphic of the answer, and my thoughts.

Preferred formats to buy a book

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My Thoughts: it’s easy to underestimate the importance of other book formats besides an eBook, but remember the collective total of paperbacks, hardbacks and audiobooks made up the larger percentage (51%). eBook only make up ~50% of preferred formats.

Of course, the most bought format is different to preferred, but I’d say have a paperback available. Through createspace it is so cheap to organise if you live in the US and not much more expensive if you live outside the US. Think broadly!

Where do you like to buy books?

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My Thoughts: I expected a slight higher percentage buying online. Are you surprised? If you have a favourite bookstore near you and have the time and means to get it in there, now might be the time to enquire since ~1/4 of book buyers want to go in-store still.

Favourite store/s to buy books from

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Other = Locally-owned, independent stores | independent bookstores | Goodwill | Toronto: Type, BMV Dymocks | Thriftbooks | and Chapters | Local Bookstore | used book stores | Fact N Fiction (New Delhi) | also used books stores & the library | Anderson’s Bookshop | WHSmith | Chapters/Indigo | Ebay, Big W

My Thoughts: This proves Amazon is vitally important, but choosing their Select program rules out 42% of other preferred stores to buy from. Now that’s a big cut! Barnes & Noble and the Book Depository jointly make up 1/4 of the results. This”42%” figure in actual terms is bigger because of all the “other” options people chose, as listed above.

Favourite genre to buy and read

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My Thoughts: Romance has historically been the biggest seller and to date remains that way. The next biggest genres listed (New Adult and Young Adult) are published in high frequency as a crossover with romance, so in all, you can see romance totally dominates. If you are publishing in lesser desired genres, you could think about incorporating aspects of romance of coming-of-age stories for a broader audience.

Does the publisher matter to you?

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My Thoughts: This was a fantastic surprise! Seems like readers don’t care (my opinion is so long as the book looks and reads professionally).

Where do you find new books to read?

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My Thoughts: Again, I stress the importance of word-of-mouth. Reviews and posting about publication of a new book is cool, but readers buy based on trust of another avid reader. So get your book into hands of readers and bloggers who’ll promote you if they love your book!

Do you read reviews? Which ones are influential in buying/not buying a book?

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My Thoughts: It’s important to find targeted reviewers if you send out ARCs or review copies. 55% of book buyers take notice to all reviews, and 82% will at least scan reviews for particular ones they are after. Bottom line is you want to put review copies in the hands of people likely to enjoy your genre and style, since you can impact this part of published reviews.

Are “star” ratings important to you?

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My Thoughts: This is great to hear. Some of the biggest sellers in history have average to low star ratings for a variety of reasons. it isn’t a biggie if your book doesn’t have a 4.5- to 5-star average.

Do you read free books? would you then continue on to buy more books by that author?

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My Thoughts: Another happy surprise! Free books are widely read in some circles, and 61% of  people who love a free book will go on to purchase other books by that author. A further 16% read all freebies. These are amazing results. Don’t underestimate the power of giving away one of your books for free.

For more info on this, read a guest post on Novel Girl going into this further here.

eBook pricing

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My Thoughts: Think about your career goals. Readers will spend their money on a book they love, so you don’t have to feel pressured to price at $0.99.

How important is a good book cover? (rate 5 very important; 1 doesn’t matter)

Screen Shot 2013-08-09 at 10.15.39 AMMy Thoughts: I stress notice here! Book with great covers sell well, whether you agree or disagree. Almost 3/4 of book buyers are heavily swayed by a well designed cover. If you’re in need of a new cover or even an updated cover, you can hire me (Berto Designs) or look at this list of other book designers I recommend.

What aspect of book covers draw you in?

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My Thoughts: Romance and beauty are the most attractive (hehe pun intended) covers for book buyers. These factors (abs, kisses, beautiful woman) make up 37% of this poll. Care with font choice can grab a buyer, too, it seems.

Note these results are probably true for YA — Adult fiction (opposed to MG and Kids Fiction).

How important is quality editing and proofreading?

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My Thoughts: Only 7% didn’t mind if you haven’t had editing and proofreading done for your book. This actually surprises me. The base line is you must hire a qualified professional. Need one? I use and recommend Lauren McKellar (senior editor at Entranced and editor for PETS magazine).

Preferred gender of narrator

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My Thoughts: I love this! Females may make up 3/4 of readers but 75% of book buyers want a mixture of narrator genders.

Do you wait until a book is on sale if you think the author will later discount?

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My Thoughts: The current book environment sees double, triple and maybe quadruple more frequent book sales than a few years ago. This is a mixed bag of results, with reader preferences varied.

Do you subscribe to any of the following and buy from them?

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My Thoughts: If you haven’t considered advertising with book sale subscription companies, I suggest you do. BookBub and Amazon’s Kindle Daily Deals affect chart toppers. I know this from my own experience and watching charts. The “Other” answer option may include “NOs” and also other actual companies. Not many book buyers don’t subscribe to anything.

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Thank you for reading! I hope this helps. Have any other comments? Just leave a reply.



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